Revising essay #1 went pretty well for me. As for, revising my peers essay, I found it a little challenging. I felt that it was hard to give five comments as my peer’s essays were pretty well written  other than a few grammatical errors, which I commented on. However, for my essay I did not receive any feedback on my essay so I found it challenging to revise it. I went back through my essay and found simple grammar mistakes that I was able to fix, thankfully. Getting started with ideas is always my weakness when it comes to writing essays. I am usually pretty good with grammar, as long as I am in quiet area concentrating on the writing that I am doing. Overall, revising essay #1 was a success. I look forward to finishing the first essay and becoming an all around better writer as the semester continues.